for late night
A Poem by
isus
long time no see
one who feel happy
for his soul is mortal
strive for dying
and wait in lost worlds
and worlds are empty
and all the words..
and all is changing
searching for change
finding nothing
and losing soul
and losing mind
when change finally come
i asked can basket feel,
or know for itself?
can i?
who is i?
or what is i?
© 2013 isus
Reviews
All is constantly changing, but perhaps not in the way we had hoped... I'm not sure if the title fits, but
I like the piece overall.
Posted 10 Years Ago
This has got kind of a Buddhist thing going on. Mortal souls dying, everything changing, crap like that, ya know? Buddhism's about the only religion I have any respect for.
Posted 10 Years Ago
This has got kind of a Buddhist thing going on. Mortal souls dying, everything changing, crap like that, ya know? Buddhism's about the only religion I have any respect for.
Loved your poem. You have a lovely mind and an intriguing way of putting thoughts into words. xo Winter
Posted 10 Years Ago
Loved your poem. You have a lovely mind and an intriguing way of putting thoughts into words. xo Winter
We all search for change and wonder if the people and things around us are aware of our profound and difficult journey.
Posted 10 Years Ago
We all search for change and wonder if the people and things around us are aware of our profound and difficult journey.
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Added on December 6, 2013
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isus brod na savi, Croatia
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nothing special. currently on earth somewhere. rather would be on moon.
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