This is sold

I come here

to look around

and wow...

I see you all.

Although in mist

or some strange smoke

I saw your eyes that

twist and broke.

If I see clear

I'd fall apart,

my rotting heart

can't stand a chance.

And I'm not strong

enough to see

and I'm not dead

but still, I'm free,

so give me love

or strenght to breathe

'cause nothing else

I do not need.

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice emotional flow. Great job Isus

[isus]

thank you.

[Rita L. Sev]

Standing strong is easier when there is someone standing with us.

[isus]

i must agree to this

[Pryde Foltz]

We are often given someone to help us ease through the day-to-day, but it is not often the one we asked for.

[isus]

true :)

[Diana]

I think you mean heart in the second stanza.

Yes, love and strength to breathe, two powerful needs...at the end.

[isus]

yes yes, thank you :) its edited.

[icelandicblue]

I could only think of a broken down house in need of some TLC.

[isus]

sorry, i dont know what is TLC

[icelandicblue]

Tender Loving Care