Rage in one illusion

Soft is an eye of

The one who can see

passing through the dawn of atom

or infinite energy, 

maybe state of fearly random

renaissance of sanity.

Double bubble little trouble.

Reviews

[Jason Henry]

there's some great expressive language here. sometimes your english threw me off a little, but i seemed to grasp what you were saying. i'm glad i stuck with it because this is a gem.

[isus]

well, thank you very much :)

[00000000000000000000000..]

I like it short yet sweet,Good rhyme:)

[isus]

thank you :D

[rankoranko]

I founded this kind of messed up really

[isus]

well, it is i would say

[burnhouse]

Croatian or English? xD

Uglavnom, kratko - slatko. Unikatno.

[isus]

hahha a hvala :D mislim da si od sviju odabrala ovu sa najmanje smisla

[burnhouse]

Hahaha, nije ni da previše ludujem za smislom. :') A i sve ću ih jednom pročititati, samo sam loša u komentiranju. :3

[isus]

smisao škodi :D de i ja sam kolko mi se čini

[burnhouse]

Točno to. :D Meni nije ni bitno iskreno kako netko napiše, dok je uzeo vremena da actually napiše nešto. :')

[isus]

upravo to :D