rock'n'roll

My little friend is living in my head,
if he could play guitar we would be a band,
he would be a rock star with a fancy name,
I would be his manager 'cause I play too lame.

I'm so happy when he's here,
sometimes far but always near,
he's so funny and amazing,
from he's eyes red fires blazing.

Reviews

[LalaLuciegirl]

i enjoy the high spirits
Luciegirl

[RainDancer1997]

In the last line I think that should be his not he's. Not sure tho:-) if I had one of those he would have to look like Axel Rose :-) lol great poem:-)

[isus]

yeah, it should be he's, so it will be, ill edit, thank you!! :D did you saw axel rose lately?

[RainDancer1997]

Yes I like him in his way younger years

[FlatLineBeauty]

This was really neat. xo Winter

[isus]

thank you Winter :D

[icelandicblue]

Your poem "rocks." Nice work.

[isus]

thanx, rock on! :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to have music in your head. Keep us positive and hopeful. I like the flow of thoughts and the artwork. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[isus]

excellent might be a little to much i think, but thank you im really glad you like it :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Mind music - always great to carry around! This is a fun piece, Isus!

[isus]

glad you like it :)

[Frieda P]

If you're going to have an imaginary friend, what better than a rock n' roll star in your dreams, very clever isus...rock on. :-)

[isus]

yeah, i agree on everything :D thanx

[Angel]

Your friend is a cutie. What's his name??

What a fun little piece!! And I love the picture...it's perfect with the poem!

[isus]

it can't be! i just realise that we don't know each other's name!! picture was made in paint :D thanx for reading ! !

[Angel]

Oh, dear...you guys need to introduce yourselves, right away!!
I suspected you might have done it in paint. It's cute as can be!!

[burnhouse]

A happy poem before happy dreams. :3 Nice.

[isus]

:D :4

[SyberRose]

Cute one...enjoyed reading...and enjoyed the theme...Rose

[isus]

thanx Rose