rock'n'roll

rock'n'roll

A Poem by isus

My little friend is living in my head,
if he could play guitar we would be a band,
he would be a rock star with a fancy name,
I would be his manager 'cause I play too lame.

I'm so happy when he's here,
sometimes far but always near,
he's so funny and amazing,
from he's eyes red fires blazing.

© 2013 isus


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i enjoy the high spirits
Luciegirl

Posted 10 Years Ago


In the last line I think that should be his not he's. Not sure tho:-) if I had one of those he would have to look like Axel Rose :-) lol great poem:-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


isus

11 Years Ago

yeah, it should be he's, so it will be, ill edit, thank you!! :D did you saw axel rose lately?
RainDancer1997

11 Years Ago

Yes I like him in his way younger years
This was really neat. xo Winter

Posted 11 Years Ago


isus

11 Years Ago

thank you Winter :D
Your poem "rocks." Nice work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


isus

11 Years Ago

thanx, rock on! :D
Good to have music in your head. Keep us positive and hopeful. I like the flow of thoughts and the artwork. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


isus

11 Years Ago

excellent might be a little to much i think, but thank you im really glad you like it :)
Mind music - always great to carry around! This is a fun piece, Isus!

Posted 11 Years Ago


isus

11 Years Ago

glad you like it :)
If you're going to have an imaginary friend, what better than a rock n' roll star in your dreams, very clever isus...rock on. :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


isus

11 Years Ago

yeah, i agree on everything :D thanx
Your friend is a cutie. What's his name??

What a fun little piece!! And I love the picture...it's perfect with the poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


isus

11 Years Ago

it can't be! i just realise that we don't know each other's name!! picture was made in paint :D than.. read more
Angel

11 Years Ago

Oh, dear...you guys need to introduce yourselves, right away!!
I suspected you might have done.. read more
A happy poem before happy dreams. :3 Nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


isus

11 Years Ago

:D :4
Cute one...enjoyed reading...and enjoyed the theme...Rose

Posted 11 Years Ago


isus

11 Years Ago

thanx Rose

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isus

brod na savi, Croatia



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