TEAM WORK

sometimes team work is key

i believe the kind of people you mingle with alters
your individuality.
people believe if you want to go far in life you have
to learn to walk alone . True fact,but it doesn't imply
all cases because sometimes team spirit is key
towards achieving certain goals.
some persons get too lucky having the right kind of
persons around but others don't...Take for instance
when soldiers form team to perform certain task
some teams perform better than other...it a simple
logic...when you are with the right kind of people it
easier to excel than been with the wrong ones.

Author's Note

pls ignore any grammatical errors still learning to reduce it to a minimal level.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I like your message here. The strongest point is when you use the example of the soldiers, becuz the rest of your message is told in generalities. Specific detail is what always brings a story or a lesson alive. This piece could use quite a bit more detail. Humans don't often do well in translating a theoretical lesson into action. They learn better by showing this being done successfully.

[King-Isah]

thanks for reviewing. your comments are well noted I think I will work more on my description (details). I really appreciate the comment at least I have learnt something today. thanks and do find time to check some of my other writings.

[barleygirl]

I will check out more of your work, little by little, day by day . . .