Float away

 

 

  The air on the ocean surface shifted

Gracefully winding

Like the gears of a grand clock

   Locked deep within the golden mine

The wind has changed, casting with it the past

 

This last breif visit

These recent days in a foggy haze

  Has propelled the sparrow in a new way

The bird now floats with the wind

At the mercy of the kind element

 

Ignorent to the end

Said the sparrows friend

Ignorant to the end

   The young bird floats down the crooked path

The path through the enchanted forest

The ancient friend

The bird floats towards the shadowy unknown

Curious to see what is at the end

To see how the dust now falls

Falls to the free elements call

Carry us to the new experience

Reviews

[Brittney]

One of my favorite poems I've read, amazing. Love your vocabulary, and the deep meaning behind this poem. Each line is so perfectly conjoined. bravo! Brilliant