Inside Out

wasn't feeling too good, ended up just writing whatever came to my mind, im sure people could relate. not really sure what genre this belongs in, ill let it find it's own way there

i feel so empty, so worthless and alone.

friends, family, they put my emotions on postpone.

no one can see my sadness, no one can hear my cries.

no one wants to help, i hide myself away from people,

while everyone wears a disguise.

people don't care anymore, people don't understand

people see what they want to see, the world lives with their head in the sand.

these people make me feel like i'm in dark places,

while i talk to them, all i see are hollow faces.

their actions can’t be forgiven nor undone, my heart once ached, but now it’s numb.

the words they say, painful like a sharp knife,

they’re all paper people, something i can't abide.

hearing the things they say, just makes me want to end my life.

Author's Note

first "poem" I've written, took around 10 minutes and its the first thing I've ever shared that I've written my self, only uploading purely because a friend told me to.

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

Great syntax and flow. It pains me to identify with it so much. I say I've forgiven, but I'll never forget.

[alice]

Your poem is a very beautiful, well-thought, true piece.

[Dead]

This is really good :) You should listen to your friend more often