Love

Love is when, 

You look into his eyes

And the whole world stops for a while

Love is when,

He smiles,

And your mood brightens for a while

Love is when,

You accidently touch him

And blush a little

Love is when,

Even in the happiest moments,

You remember him

Love is when, You can;t sleep during nights

Thinking about him

Yeah baby,its all love.

Reviews

[Michael G.]

I get the feeling in this poem of the discovery of "first time love." It has an exciting, cute quality to it, though the second usage of ". . . for a while" caused me to pause to look back to make sure I was reading this again.
Repeating a thought can be a very effective tool. I felt like this might have been worded differently. Just my thought. Not a criticism of your overall work.

[Amaira]

Thanks for ur review @michael G,I'll working on that thing!

[bubblefet]

smooth i really like it great work

[Amaira]

Tysm @bubblefet!