Being Heartless

The reel rolls again from the doors of another manufacturing company, a company manufacturing puppets of the CEOs’s , a engineering college St. Christen Engineering college ,new delhi.

But one day among these over stressed brats enters a demon whose principle of life was to live today screw tomorrow n yesterday. The guy’s habit was to break every strangled hold of the system persisting within the system. A 'born to free' guy with asphalts in his eyes to live life king size.

 There was a altogether different world of a dove, a delicate angle lives under the shades of her parents has an ambition to fill their hands with every possible happiness.

One fine day the demon comes in contact with this angle in his own wild and vicious way. The girl hesitated a bit but was curious to test his wild intensions. But as days passed she came to know that this barbarian mask was actually to fight with this ruthless world. The friendship grew to a blossom of love but it was all from the boy’s side.

The girl used to call him "heartless" whenever she became emotional because he remained still hard as rock with an iron heart.

This blossom was ruined by the one of girls cider and prove that guy worse and a down-market person by making her to believe that he was just using her and playing with her till he get satisfied. She believed her friend more than him and broke all her relations in just one night and left him all alone, solitaire in the arms of silver moon to moan and to curse himself for the deed he never done .He was punished for the thing he haven;t done. The two got separated and the girl started to hate him from core of her heart but the guy never quit his efforts and never lost his hope.

A day came for which the guy waited for so long to say something that could change the situation n the tables can be turned, it was the girl's b'day.

The two were in a bus but before reaching to its destination it met to a massive accident. The guy survived but the girl got clinched in the battle between life and death , she got her heart punctured and there was no remedy but an heart transplant but there was no donor available. Her friends were feeling helpless n defeated. Then suddenly phone of the doctor rang and the wrinkles of his forehead were disappeared because he got a donor. The girl got operated immediately and was saved as the surgery was successful.

She was in her ward resting surrounded with her friends and receiving b’day wishes from her friends. Then suddenly the guy entered in his wild way and said “I am so glad that you are ok and by the way a very happy b’day to u” and just disappeared rushing through the gate. The girl didn’t get any time to respond. After a few minutes later the surgeon entered n enquired about her health then as the girl was curious to know the name of her savior, she asked the doc  that who was the donor the doctor said someone from St. Christen college . She got shocked a bit and asked the doc that can she see his face. The doc took her to the room where the dead bodies were preserved for organ donation. The girl saw his face and her face got whitened because it was our demon lying cold as ice and hard like stone, slept never to wake up again. He was holding a piece of paper, the girl took it and read with her waterlogged eyes the words were “Look i am still heartless”.

 

Moral

“The presence of flowers in the garden is acknowledged when they got ruined ruthlessly without any reason.”

Reviews

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Wow that was a beautiful story. The first paragraph was fantastic though the use of 'n' and 'r' seemed odd. I think you could have added more dialogues like when she calls him heartless and when she asks the doctor who the donor was. I think it could have been better if you had mentioned that he killed himself to lend her. The analogy with a demon was impressive. I also would like to see why she got mad at him in the first place. Good luck!

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Its a whole lot better now! I think you misspelled 'angel' as 'angle'. As I said earlier, love the story. The ending was perfect.

[Akshat♥]

first of all...welcome ishan in this new world of writing...i like this story a lot ...mainly the moral which is impressive indeed:) but you can improve while you go through the passing time...good luck:)