Uncomfortably Helpless

Random, uncomfortable sensations..

Wondering late night
Morning is far off
Breathing air without life

Eyes scream and burn
Fragile tight hands
Void of moisture

Suffocating numbness
Searing deep inside
One last lick

Aching insatiable thirst
Pain seeps through
Enveloping my world

Tender uneasy breath
Once more shifting
Tossing side to side

Reviews

[Dream Slave]

Nothing to do about the helpless feeling when one is locked in the cages of life. Very good piece

[Ruth]

You verse anguish well love! This is claustrophobic, in a good way lol
This is a hard hitting poem that leaves the reader in thought :)
Unsettling:)
Great work
xx

[serpent]

an uncomfortable sensation indeed. the wait of the dawn can make us so restless at times... no wonder all these feelings creep inside and time seems to have frozen...
exquisite read!
You are my Pink Floyd of WC, Isha!

[Loki Ragna-rock]

you make this restless, uneasy mind-state seem all too familiar.