Something of inspiration

Leaving behind reason and wonder as what feeling might swell up in the lives of those surrounding my outer world. Not meaning harm when I hear you calling my name. I can not say I don't listen for any good reason of distraction. Waiting simply for the calls that might reach my direct place of desire. And so I might be inspired.

Inspired action is what Ill take
I cannot mend the ties I break
Intentions are lined with an open mind
Tell me more than what I sought to find
Another way you'll have to spend
A good life story of dreams pretend.

-Isha Ethera

Reviews

[Alex Zynder]

sometimes when the lines rhyme like yours do, it seems like the writer is rhyming for the sake of rhyming. Yours, on the other hand, doesn't come off that way. It has the right pace, and rhymes all fit without seeming forced at all.
a nice piece that gives off a great feeling

[serpent]

well...this read reminds me of some lines from Rocky... "Life will hit as hard as noone else does... you gotta be able to take the hits and keep moving forward"
a powerful and inspiring piece!
most of the times we judge our mental strength bases our ability to hold on to things no matter how worst is the situation...guess we forget that letting go of things needs more than what we have...something that i believe is super-human!
the lines have very beautifully descirbed the same message to me...

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i love the rhythm of this, and
the great rhyme scheme is perfect!!!
(great piece of poetry)

:)

[Ruth]

Adore the structure to this one, free form, it would seem :) I think that helps add an interesting quality to it :)
Makes the reader aware of consequence!
xx