The World of Hurt

Do you know this feeling?

My eyelids are closing, my vision is blurry,

My head is pounding so hard, I swear, it's gonna blow.

I hear the voice across the drift, words so harmonic and clear,

I feel your eyes in my back, it burns through the fabric.

 

Pull my weary hand into another realm.

Release me from this nightmare, free me from despair.

Drain my liquid life and pour it to the ground,

Seize the knife and take me, Take me from this Hell,

 

For I am lost and broken, my strings no longer work,

All I see is darkness, all I feel is hurt.

Tears freeze down my face, I know of nothing else,

Except this living anguish, except the World of Hurt.

Reviews

[Rahul]

Aww ... don't be sad, I know the world's very bad and it does hurt but you should be strong so that you could face the world .. and fight for yer rights. Your this poem's filled with feelings .. and yes, i've felt the feelings of 'Being Hurt' .. well penned, Nice flow of ink :)

[Lucien Maier]

Good emotion and discription. I have read some of this and your other stuff. You have construction Down now it time to start telling story with that skill.. I look forward to more