Killer

For a lustful desire.. (which im sure we've all been guilty of"

 

Minds, minds

Mine is mine

Goodnight killer; bye

Lullaby sung

Bye bye time

Am I blind?

You will find no, hear no cry

  My eyes

  No wonder why, a

  Hunter denied

  A Halo from dark fires

  Drunken night files

 

Lust denied, love not f**k, thirst subsided

Witness to those desires

 

Got my notes

I Watched the show twice

you know me?

Yeah right

A Heads up

Too def to hypnotize

Yummmmmy

My honey's lovely breasts

Her sweet thighs

Sex to the touch

Treat to the eye

Act of the love

You have no angle for a fight

 

Why waste the time for a wannabe killer

Goodnight the weak

No blood will weep this time

Reviews

[Kayleen]

this is really cool. its kind of scattered but it works great. thanks for the reviews btw :)

[Sean M. Addams]

very powerful piece i like the imagery in this.... I really could visualize this poem... overall the flow was good and I like how the ending kind of catches you off guard but still summons it up well... nice job on this.