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I can relate to feeling like this, and understand why it gets here. This poem is the adverse and sequel to Wave.

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Alone

Cold

Entrapped

Slain at mans hands

 

Frustrated

Restrained

Reigned

Chained to life's pain

 

Uncertain

Unsure

Uneasy

Uncommon and disillusioned

 

Hoping

Frowning

Crawling

Seeking a new way

Reviews

[Bud]

Raw and powerful write! Most intriguing perspective! Simply Excellent!!!

[James Paulin]

Pure sentiment is powerful! I try to pack as much as possible into haiku. I like raw poems that are intrinisically captivating. Nice work.