Canvas Poem

Many people know pain

People of everyday

Artistic expression on display

Hearts of the day

 

A canvas is life's escape

Find soul and your mind sways

Inspired by life

Life is lived everyday

 

Wishes to spawn change

Change to affect lives

All eyes see a new rise

All found with our own minds

 

Positive in every way

Faith in its own right

No, days don't just go by

Moving forward in new light.

 

Reviews

[Amber Elaine Marshall]

Unity is all that comes to mind. When reading this piece I see the things in life that unite us, hardships and struggle, determination and strength, expression and creation, faith and persistance, and finally will to live. These are all common things all of mankind shares and what unites us as a functioning society for all of mankind shares the pain of hardships, we all desperatly strive to rise from it, we all express our displeasure of it and create a means to end it, we keep fighting our way through it day after day with the idea of the haven ahead that awaits us once we have escaped. A great example of what brings us together in life in general.

[Water_the_Sun]

I agree with Amber completely.

And i also think that this represents not only the struggle and our fight, but our will to survive and our final triumph, though not gained yet, entirely. IT will come one day. Not so much Heaven, but peace, for sure, in some form, pure happiness, love, all will reign victorious, be it on earth or in some alternate time and place...

[Alfred's Word]

Very good piece,I like your style.