UntitledA Story by Isa RuffattiSocial influencer Dannie Cardenas has been on a 5 week cleanse when a follower tracks her down and asks for her help.I.
Dannie barely registered tree
after tree after tree. Around her, the birds chirped, the sun shone, and the
cold dry wind slapped her face. She’d never been to this part of the woods
before and her foot hit an unexpected log. The world spun, and she landed on
her knees.
‘Moron!’, she groaned, driving a fist
into the dirt and turning around.
Lost, she was so...there it was. The
black light post with the Missing dog flyer she used to mark thirty minutes
spent running. Ginny the beagle was apparently still missing. She stared at it
stupidly.
A
snarl comes from the thick shrubbery. In this position I’m a deer in a clearing.
Dinner. Two
more snarls come from the tall and thick trees around me. One from the left,
the other from the right. I’m surrounded now. An impossible escape that. Even
then, wherever I run, they will follow. The certainty itself could kill me. ...Ok,
stop it. You’re not a deer. No
one is following you. Breathe in, breathe out. When did you become so
unbearably paranoid? It was time to go
home. Once back, she would have been out an hour. Well, slightly more
considering she’d run straight past her marker. Ignoring the scrape on her knee,
she got up and started running ran back. Thump, thump. Breathe in, breathe out.
Tree after tree after tree, she drew closer. Tree after tree after- person. Person? Dannie stopped, turned
around. Sure enough, there was a person. A scowling teenage girl to be exact.
Dressed in black. Layer upon layer of make-up. Not trying to break any
stereotypes, I see. Holding up a phone in the air like it was Simba being
initiated into the Circle of Life, the teen groaned, and snarled under her
breath. Stupid. Stupid. Stupid. ‘Hi’ Dannie said, mentally scanning
through her daily to-do list. Tear herself from a dream-less sleep? Check. Run
for an hour in the woods? Check. Greet another human being for the first time
in five weeks? Check.
The girl’s swollen eyes widened
slightly. ‘Are you lost?’ Dannie added,
face-palming herself almost instantly. Judging from the teen’s frantic search
for signal, no s**t. ‘Dannie Cardenas. You just ghosted.
Not cool.’ the teen spat and took a step forward, towering over Dannie. ‘Who...?’ Dannie started to ask. ‘I’m Theresa. You don’t know me, but
I follow you. And I need your help.’ ‘Hold on, you’ve been following me? What
the hell?’ ‘Oh god, not like literally. I’m not
a stalker, okay? I meant online. Instagram, YouTube, Tumblr, Twitter’. 'Oh.' ‘It’s kind of funny really. If people
who follow you online got together and like really followed you... You’d look
like the messiah or something’. ‘How did you find me?’ 'In one of your first vids, you
mention jogging in these particular woods as part of your stress begone ritual.
I'm from around, so I know you're not talking about the Forbidden Forest.' ‘Huh’. Theresa proceeded to roll her eyes. ‘You
were talking about the Scottish referendum and how the BBC was the government’s
puppet. You love politics but sometimes it stresses you out. Running helps you
relax,’ she shrugged, and Dannie thought she saw a tiny but brief smile, ‘Not
sure how you’ll run the crazy away now that a cheerio runs America, though’. ‘Couldn’t you text?’ ‘I did. 50 times.’ Sigh. ‘What with?’ ‘My ex. He needs to die.’ Dannie’s thick eyebrows shot
up. ‘He won’t stop’ Theresa blurted out,
‘Following me- Literally, I mean. He still thinks we’re together.’ ‘Have you gone to the authorities?’ Theresa nodded. Looking her in the
face, Dannie thought she could see a hint of purple under all the mascara.
Silence stretched for some time. II.
‘Coffee or tea?’ ‘Just water, please,’ Theresa sat on
a tiny yellow couch, the only piece of furniture not colonised by clothes or
books. She found herself staring at Dannie’s to-do list-covered walls. Do the groceries. Brainstorm ideas for new video. Call mom. She wondered
how Dannie didn't drown in the debris of responsibility. Guessing from the missing
checks or lines drawn through the middle, maybe she had. Or at least, that's
what Dannie thought she was thinking. Her mother had said something similar. ‘Sorry for the mess’ Dannie said,
motioning and handing her a mug with water. It read: Don’t panic. Drink coffee
and carry on. It appeared she hadn’t lost that relic, dating from her uni days.
Back then an unfinished thesis was a more than reasonable cause for panic. ‘So, you’re a coffee person’ Theresa said as she regarded the mug, as if
critiquing a work of art. Eyes level with said object, pursed lips, knitted
eyebrows. She was gazing at a mug, but Dannie suddenly felt gazed at herself. Worse,
she felt naked before Theresa, like those marble statues in museums, except her
features hadn’t been chiselled by an eminent Italian Renaissance artist. There
were bags under her eyes. Hair was already breaking free from her high-up tight
ponytail. And despite all the exercise, her love handles were showing. Whatever
anxiety she hadn’t cardioed out of existence was promptly given diabetes. An
exaggerated case of pear shape, more like. Her critic sipped water from the mug, then (finding no space on Dannie’s
coffee table) put it on the floor dismissively. Disappointed. Dannie adjusted
her jumper nervously. ‘You came alone?’ Theresa shrugged again, ‘Maybe.’ ‘I don’t have a gun’ ‘I do’ Theresa whispered.
Closing her eyes, Dannie saw a line.
Or thought she did. Was she imagining it? Where there no lines in this life but
the ones people draw for themselves?
Someone knocked at the door.
III.
‘Don’t,’ Theresa hissed, crossing her
arms tightly around her skinny torso, ‘Please’. ‘Theresa! Theresa! Open up, damn
you!’, came a voice from outside. The knocking grew louder. Theresa’s crossing
tighter. ‘My next-door neighbour has
supersonic hearing. Anything happens, he’ll know’ Dannie assured her, then headed for the door ‘As a matter of fact, he’s
probably already outside’. At half five in the morning, every morning save for
Sundays, the man’s alarm would go off. Through thin walls, Dannie could hear him
typing away. Clunk, clunk, clunk. Probably on a very old Windows desktop. Composing
his master novel, he’d told her once. ‘Dannie Cardenas lives here. Look, I
don’t know any Theresa. And stop screaming, will you?’
Crrrreeeeaak. Bloody door. Sure enough, Dannie’s neighbour, an
old wiry man in his fifties wearing a red bath robe over his pyjamas was
outside arguing with what looked to be Theresa’s ex.
‘You get out of my way now’.
The ex was short, about Dannie’s height. But he was big, evidently the
type that spent long hours at the gym, never happy with his sculpted body. Or
with anything, really. The choleric expression he was giving her neighbour
said, ‘Back off or I’ll break your face’. ‘Or else what? You’ll tell your dad?
Ha! Tell him I’m not voting for him next election while you’re at it. All those
promises about stimulating the economy? Rubbish.’
Dannie was stung by a foreboding fear for the safety of her neighbour’s
face. But the ex’s piggy eyes now focused on her. Seeing the door open, he pushed
past her, casually swatting her aside like a fly. Dannie fell, she became
vaguely aware of a dull thud on the side of her head, the tell-tale metallic
taste in her mouth as she bit hard on her unsuspecting tongue.
She thought she heard a shrill shout,
‘I’m calling the police!’ and her neighbour’s receding footsteps as he scurried
back to the safety of his room. Emergency, which service? Dannie could imagine him describing how the hulk that was the mayor’s
son had randomly showed up at his neighbour’s doorstep. A real brat. Dangerous.
Had pushed past his neighbour -she could be hurt- Not to mention it’d
interrupted his creative process. Something had to be done about that. And the
hulk’s father... Well, there was a reason why his writing remained a hobby. He’d
then go deep into rant territory.
In a matter of ten minutes the most, the cops would be at her door.
Theresa had a gun. But Dannie couldn’t be sure she had ten minutes. With
difficulty, she got up and entered the room. ‘Please...’, Chekhov’s gun was drawn and pointing in the ex’s direction.
Anguished and shocked, Theresa didn’t see him coming as he sprung towards her,
wrestled the gun from her hand, and threw it across the room. He put his hands
around her neck as she thrashed against him helplessly. A man stands by the
side of the street just outside the subway station. On his
phone, oblivious. Ripe for the picking. He walks on. Three young men
follow him. Something other than blood pumps in their veins. Alcohol. Hormones.
And s****y advice. Kill, kill, kill. Scenting their
prey, and emboldened by wise words, they walk faster. Feet propel them towards the
unavoidable. Almost hurting towards it. So close. They are walking
through a residential area now. It is late at night. There’s few people around. Now. But the man has
stopped before a house. His house. Fumbles through his coat pockets for
his keys. In a second he will be gone. The keys fall to
the floor and the man swears in Spanish, ‘Mierda’. Bends down to pick them up. This is it. The
three men circle him, coming closer, fists raised. ‘Por favor,’ the
man begs, ‘I have a daughter!’ That was the last time Dannie heard
her father’s voice.
She’d been re-reading 1984, and was excreting
a love of freedom from every pore. Everyone should have it. Why? Cause-why not?
He thought it should not to be given lightly, quoting the fourth book from her favourite
Young Adult book series, Uglies, by
Scott Westerfeld, “You see, freedom has a way of destroying things”.
A neo-Nazi was as free to spout his
beliefs unto anyone who might lend him an ear as Dannie was to share her
critical views on the government with the world. As a result, her father had
been murdered, and a young follower went to Dannie asking for help in fighting
back when all else had failed.
She thought of those hands whose
impact had painted Theresa’s right side of her face purple, splayed on the cold
concrete floor. Bloody. A hole through his forehead. Limping and pushing through towers of
books, she picked up the gun. © 2018 Isa RuffattiAuthor's Note
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Added on January 10, 2018 Last Updated on January 10, 2018 Tags: shortstory, story, mystery, suspense, fiction Author
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