Unspoken Words

I often scribble in the sand 
The words I find so hard to say
And hope the wind will come along 
And blow them all your way.

Reviews

[Ashley Griffiths]

These sentiments are felt by many. You sum up this complex emotional conflict perfectly.

[don't know]

thank you for your kind words. Ashley

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like this...could also be like typing the words on a piece of paper and having it blow her way...

or a message in a bottle...blown on the waves to her heart.

simple and beautiful...

[don't know]

thank you Jacob. :)

[Dhaye]

Nice presentation. When you scribble on the sand, words will be washed away by the waves but will be carried by the wind to the heart...

Thanks for the share.

[don't know]

Thanks for your review Daisie! :) x

[Leslie Philibert]

Nice poem, with a compact, thoughtful message

[don't know]

thank you for your kind words Leslie.