if not god

i miss him

Who hears me?
If not god,
Who has counted
The tears
Shed in the days
Without you?

Author's Note

feedback is appreciated!

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Loss is painful. Break ups are painful. My granddaughter who lives with me has just gone through this. Heartbroken she was and I counted her tears and felt her pain too. Time softens. Yes it does. Your little piece of brevity will be relatable to many. Welcome to the cafe.

Chris

[cricket]

thank you ❤️

[Gee]

Hi Cricket, your " ignore grammar problems" will deter some folk from reading you as when all is said and done this is a reading/ writing site.

[cricket]

i just didn’t want my reviews to be flooded with people fixing my grammar. My poetry is from the heart and what I really wanted to know is how the words and the meaning behind them resonate with people.

[Gee]

Folk on here are not prone to that, they will comment on the content, perhaps pick up on typos etc. They will also give advice if asked.
It's a good place to hone your skills :)

[cricket]

I appreciate your advice, thank you. But I refuse to make my experiences with writing also about made up rules and restrictions. I could care less if it’s grammatically correct, I use writing to escape that structure. I edited the posts anyways, but that is how I feel about it :)

[Gee]

:) Welcome to the cafe, I hope you enjoy :))