Worlds Of Wanderers

Words are worlds of wanderers;

Waning wishes, his or hers.

Time is but an apprentice

Learning lessons- Silence through noise.

 

Through my ringing ears I hear  

The nocturnal heralds of hazy peril,

Then with my weary withered eyes,

I see the oceans drowning skies.

 

I sauntered the deserts of scorching sands

With club and cryptic cubes in hands;

Skewered and shuddered the green less land,

Espying for eons to end an errand.

 

A realm through a portal I found,

Where once, deities and devils dwelt appeased;

Only to return with a broken might

When a shattered fairytale besieged my sight.

 

                    

 

                                                                                                                                                                                                            FETUS~

                                       11/02/12

Reviews

[Shadows of Memories]

Amazing format. and amazing thought process. through every word u give a vivid picture of exactly whats happening... my best lines are :
"I sauntered the deserts of scorching sands
With club and cryptic cubes in hands;
Skewered and shuddered the green less land,
Espying for eons to end an errand."

its obviously a very interstng write announcing strength and depth in it. I love the metaphor of the traveller u used. It has enhanced the underlying meaning so beautifully. Just can say its one of the best pieces tht i have come across :) keep sharing nd thnks

[Neville]

Time is but an apprentice... what fantastic words, each strung together seamlessly & so meaningfully. The whole thing becomes quite beautiful as I journey through it. I can only echo many of the positives some of my predecessor reviewers have conveyed before me. All Good Things, Neville

[PossiblyAlice]

reading this gave me a strange feeling. You know it's good writing when it elicits feelings :) I love how much imagery there is, its quite inspiring!

[CecilA]

My comment is a summation of the previous reviews. Thank you for sharing this inspiring poem. Write on.

[Chris]

Finally - can be a long time coming... I wonder the actuality of the last stanza's sight.

[R.M. Duchene]

Thank you for posting. I really enjoyed this :)

[Nina Burke]

Amazing piece! Ill be reading this again and again

[Time's The Bond]

I quite like it

[B-poet]

Very eloquent, endearing, emphatic and a distinctive tone of originality. Great job. :)

[Mary Christabel George]

"Learning a lesson of Silence in noise" and "When a shattered fairytale besieged my sight". What wonderful lines are they. Lovely!

[michael.c.m]

Deep and wide, this is. Well-written.