Worlds Of Wanderers

Words are worlds of wanderers;

Waning wishes, his or hers.

Time is but an apprentice

Learning lessons- Silence through noise.

 

Through my ringing ears I hear  

The nocturnal heralds of hazy peril,

Then with my weary withered eyes,

I see the oceans drowning skies.

 

I sauntered the deserts of scorching sands

With club and cryptic cubes in hands;

Skewered and shuddered the green less land,

Espying for eons to end an errand.

 

A realm through a portal I found,

Where once, deities and devils dwelt appeased;

Only to return with a broken might

When a shattered fairytale besieged my sight.

 

                    

 

                                                                                                                                                                                                            FETUS~

                                       11/02/12

Reviews

[Shadows of Memories]

Amazing format. and amazing thought process. through every word u give a vivid picture of exactly whats happening... my best lines are :
"I sauntered the deserts of scorching sands
With club and cryptic cubes in hands;
Skewered and shuddered the green less land,
Espying for eons to end an errand."

its obviously a very interstng write announcing strength and depth in it. I love the metaphor of the traveller u used. It has enhanced the underlying meaning so beautifully. Just can say its one of the best pieces tht i have come across :) keep sharing nd thnks

[Ron Gerald]

Wonderfully executed poem. Enjoyed every bit of it.
Ron

[ThomasJay]

Beautifully done.

[.:Arianna:.]

I'm glad I came across your work. It is really original and so rich in imagery!
''Time is but an apprentice
Learning a lesson of Silence in noise.''

Loved that part!

[Stan]

Loved the first line.

[dreaming dame]

beautiful. I felt like I traveled the world:)
Love the words you used:)

[Miranda Richard]

What a lovely poem, your rhyming pattern was great. Keep it up :)

[Firestone Feinberg]

This is wonderful. A pleasure to read. Describes Experience uniquely. --David

[Rachel Landes]

Beautiful, fresh and crammed full of feeling. Magical enough for me to think I read this is in a fairy tale.

[LostandAlone]

I like this... It's very beautiful...

[junaid altaf]

oh my!
i found a homie!
and the poem!
well you have crafted it magnificently!