Worlds Of Wanderers

Words are worlds of wanderers;

Waning wishes, his or hers.

Time is but an apprentice

Learning lessons- Silence through noise.

 

Through my ringing ears I hear  

The nocturnal heralds of hazy peril,

Then with my weary withered eyes,

I see the oceans drowning skies.

 

I sauntered the deserts of scorching sands

With club and cryptic cubes in hands;

Skewered and shuddered the green less land,

Espying for eons to end an errand.

 

A realm through a portal I found,

Where once, deities and devils dwelt appeased;

Only to return with a broken might

When a shattered fairytale besieged my sight.

 

                    

 

                                                                                                                                                                                                            FETUS~

                                       11/02/12

Reviews

[Shadows of Memories]

Amazing format. and amazing thought process. through every word u give a vivid picture of exactly whats happening... my best lines are :
"I sauntered the deserts of scorching sands
With club and cryptic cubes in hands;
Skewered and shuddered the green less land,
Espying for eons to end an errand."

its obviously a very interstng write announcing strength and depth in it. I love the metaphor of the traveller u used. It has enhanced the underlying meaning so beautifully. Just can say its one of the best pieces tht i have come across :) keep sharing nd thnks

[wrote.here]

Definitely gave me chills and goosebumps :)
wonderful write

[Michael John]

Very adventurous poem, I had fun reading the alliteration in the third stanza.

[Penny]

First line is the best. I like this kind of play of words

[Vaishali Roopesh]

I just love your descriptive pieces! Reeeally good poem.

[Madalyn Beck]

I love the imagery that you brought to life in my mind through your wonderful writing! I loved the flow you provided with this. Great work!

[Linda alexander]

Then with my weary withered eyes,
I see the oceans drowning skies.
Elegant, carrying strong message, enjoyed

[Erik Daniel]

Wow. Simply amazing and So well written! Good job!

[Penny]

Very nice poem. The imagery and rhyming is really good.

[Tania]

I love the way you allowed the readers to have a vivid picture of the scene and I love it 😊👌

[Elly_Green]

Wow! You have a definite way with words. I do hope you are actively seeking publication. You are that good and I look forward to seeing you honored for years to come. I am truly blown away with your talent.