Darkness Bids a Bye

Darkness Bids a Bye

A Poem by Irfan Bashir Shah

Of spoils of which I tell

In their lapse my memories fell,

I recall a blurry grey voice

Which tasted ice, for fire to suffice-

“What watchful eye the predator wears

Incessant intrusions of memories engage”

 

The answer to his questions I do seek

When the moon is shy and night at peak.

An impasse and intricate cogs

Muddle my sight of prayer,

Then a voice which sounds far but seems near

Screams loud for me to hear:

“Long have I been in a ceaseless epoch

Burning in the rivulets of reveries

But then a light so abhorred from my abyss I made

To thwart my appeasing forlorn fate”

 

I hear such voices every night

When times’ nimbus cloak lullabies my sight.

Outside the morning sleeps- away from night.

 

 

                        Fetus~

© 2013 Irfan Bashir Shah


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Each time I read poetry from a Poet with great skill from India. I'm impressed with the school system. I like how you used the language. Making your point with powerful statements and great skill.
"An impasse and intricate cogs
Muddle my sight of prayer,"
A strong ending to a outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Love the imagery

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love this. It is written with truth; the feeling is felt.

Posted 11 Years Ago


aah, a 'real' poet so am especially flattered that you felt moved to comment on mine. A skilful and beautiful write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is quite an interesting one.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You really turn a phrase in this poem it holds edgy images but the piece reads as stained glass, both smooth and with a wide spectrum.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow! -flails arms in excitement- This is one outstanding poem I've ever seen in my life! I've never seen one that was so well.. powerful, and have so much skillz!! - jumps around- You seem like a popular poet not to mention an epic one too! One thing for sure, I can never do a poem like that! I love how you worded things with awesome vocabulary! XD

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Spectacular poem.
The words you chose in your poem are really so rich.
I'd love to read more by you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Perfect in all senses!


Posted 12 Years Ago


wow, it was written so I had to keep reading. Beautiful. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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