Darkness Bids a Bye

Of spoils of which I tell

In their lapse my memories fell,

I recall a blurry grey voice

Which tasted ice, for fire to suffice-

“What watchful eye the predator wears

Incessant intrusions of memories engage”

 

The answer to his questions I do seek

When the moon is shy and night at peak.

An impasse and intricate cogs

Muddle my sight of prayer,

Then a voice which sounds far but seems near

Screams loud for me to hear:

“Long have I been in a ceaseless epoch

Burning in the rivulets of reveries

But then a light so abhorred from my abyss I made

To thwart my appeasing forlorn fate”

 

I hear such voices every night

When times’ nimbus cloak lullabies my sight.

Outside the morning sleeps- away from night.

 

 

                        Fetus~

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Each time I read poetry from a Poet with great skill from India. I'm impressed with the school system. I like how you used the language. Making your point with powerful statements and great skill.
"An impasse and intricate cogs
Muddle my sight of prayer,"
A strong ending to a outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Gray Witch]

Love the imagery

[Rachel Landes]

I love this. It is written with truth; the feeling is felt.

[Indie Skreet]

aah, a 'real' poet so am especially flattered that you felt moved to comment on mine. A skilful and beautiful write.

[Draven]

This is quite an interesting one.

[Cherrie]

You really turn a phrase in this poem it holds edgy images but the piece reads as stained glass, both smooth and with a wide spectrum.

[CrimsonBlaze]

Wow! -flails arms in excitement- This is one outstanding poem I've ever seen in my life! I've never seen one that was so well.. powerful, and have so much skillz!! - jumps around- You seem like a popular poet not to mention an epic one too! One thing for sure, I can never do a poem like that! I love how you worded things with awesome vocabulary! XD

[Sahar moonlight]

Spectacular poem.
The words you chose in your poem are really so rich.
I'd love to read more by you.

[Ron Gerald]

Perfect in all senses!

[dreaming dame]

wow, it was written so I had to keep reading. Beautiful. :)