Darkness Bids a Bye

Of spoils of which I tell

In their lapse my memories fell,

I recall a blurry grey voice

Which tasted ice, for fire to suffice-

“What watchful eye the predator wears

Incessant intrusions of memories engage”

 

The answer to his questions I do seek

When the moon is shy and night at peak.

An impasse and intricate cogs

Muddle my sight of prayer,

Then a voice which sounds far but seems near

Screams loud for me to hear:

“Long have I been in a ceaseless epoch

Burning in the rivulets of reveries

But then a light so abhorred from my abyss I made

To thwart my appeasing forlorn fate”

 

I hear such voices every night

When times’ nimbus cloak lullabies my sight.

Outside the morning sleeps- away from night.

 

 

                        Fetus~

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Each time I read poetry from a Poet with great skill from India. I'm impressed with the school system. I like how you used the language. Making your point with powerful statements and great skill.
"An impasse and intricate cogs
Muddle my sight of prayer,"
A strong ending to a outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Otsana]

Very beautiful, eerie descriptions in this poem. Your use of language is great, I almost feel like I am still waiting for something, still hanging on to the words. Great job!

[Writer]

Beautiful. The only real word to describe the piece I have just read.

[SlightlyOdd]

I really loved the imagery and language in this poem it was stunning, absolutely stunning.

[Enigma]

Very intriguing and powerful.

[topsyturvy]

Burning in the rivulets of reveries
But then a light so abhorred from my abyss I made
To thwart my appeasing forlorn fate”

Beautiful, simply beautiful :)

[KlineXcreed]

I love how the rhyme scheme goes and how you obviously took a deep care in writing such a meaningful and poetic poem. You are an inspiration, thanks!

[Elly_Green]

This is just plain awesome! A great poem, full of imagery, strong word choice, and a powerful message. Good job!

[MoriartyMesa]

The humble wording is nice.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good show..!!

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[Saddam]

very intresting and lovely poem...
Peak is how you hear a far song to near. A heartfilled poetry dear friend. i am lost within it.