P-Tech

it's quite informative chapter. I've the behavior of Non Muslims towards Muslims in this chapter.

 

"Oh yes I see" Sadia exclaimed. "But we can't make everyone familiar with it" she cried.
"Why and how can you say this we can familiar everyone and we both will" Ahmed raised objection.
"No we can't familiar and we will not do this because the government makes our lives perplex and in the last they occur death to us" she gave reason.
"But don't you think that we need to do this to erase the stain like word terrorist from the pure word Muslim!" He objected.
She irritated" why we need to do this if we are living in the four walls instead of streets and don't be serious because after some days no one will remember it “she replied by moving and making expressions according to the words.
"May Allah everyone forget it like you've said Amen”, he prayed while sitting on sofa seriously. Ahmed then changed the topic by asking her that is she receive his email about job at it company.

“Yes I see your mail, the pay is quiet good” she replied but suddenly Kabir started crying “muma muma” that’s why she had to go towards his son, “Ahmed I will talk you later okay” she insisted. Ahmed who started smoking as usual at 9 pm was thinking about 9/11 and making predictions with using the data which took out from research, he was seeing the paper on which he wrote 9/11=9+1+1=11 but he can’t concentrate on it  as the phone rang he picked up the phone

“Aslam O Alikum Amir how are you” he questioned

“Walikum Aslam nothing fine” Amir replied

Ahmed with surprised manner “is everything alright”

Amir kept quiet for a second than he replied in surprised way “yes everything is alright< he rubbed his eyes with tense mood and continue “I phoned you for asking you about that have you completed your black file”

“No, it is almost done” Ahmed replied.

“Have you got news about Odigo message service?” Amir asked

“yes I listen about it on news channel” while taking out ashes from his cigarette he continue “that one of their user got a message two hours before the attack that there is going to happen something so be careful but on the other hand that journalist is saying that the workers of Odigo have searched about it and thay don’t get any message related to these attacks. Don’t you think it is rubbish I mean what a lame excuse they gave just to save themselves from the police visit in theirs office. But from other sources I got to know that they got but they didn’t tell anyone and if now they declare that they really got the message then they have to close their service and in fear of that they lie that is it!” he explained

Then he asked while going in kitchen for putting an ash tray on counter “what did you get I mean information?”

“Yar nothing actually I am not too much interested in it instead of I am interested about that what will bush do next against Afghanistan because I got news from a source that now he will send  his NATO force in Afghanistan just for taking revenge of 9/11” he replied in sarcastic way but he refer this sarcastic way for Bush.

Ahmed in informative way “as a Muslim Amir I don’t think that Osama Bin Laden did a crime by doing this” then in a sarcastic way loudly “what about Bush, isn’t a crime to strike bomb or missile on Gaza strip with Israel for Bush!”

Amir in the same manner as Ahmed whatever and how much anger in his heart for bush taking out through words “you are right but they the government will not dare to to realize their mistake they can only know how to degrade Muslims but they” with sarcastic smile while walking in house “don’t know what they did and doing is a crime or not, is it wrong or not”

“we are journalist that is why we know better than public and I will give them such news to show how much bush is characterless, I promise”, after yawning he said “tomorrow I will talk you at office  but now take care ALLAHAFIZ, Good night” Ahmed ended and went to bed.

                              

“Aslam O Alikum Ammi!” Kiran hugged her mother in law. Her mother in law hugged and pleased “How are you beta!” while hugging. While Kiran moved rat right to Salam her father in law. With a big smile he Salam “Aslam O Alikum abu, how are you. Kiran’s husband, Shamir greeted his mother eagerly with lots of happiness and kissed on her hand. He greeted his father and brother by hugging them but to sister he shake hand and greet her “Aslam O Alikum, are you Iffat”, he then congratulated her “Shaddi Mubarak” just like a loving Pakistani brother. Iffat in return thanked “thank you, Walikum Aslam, how are you”. Then his brother asked his sister in law and brother to come in house and question like a younger naughty brother by putting hand on his elder brother Shamir “ bhai what about your journey, is it comfortable?” his elder brother, Shamir with naughty expressions put his hand on his younger brother and replied and laughed “Ha HA ! no yar,” then he pointed out to Kiran and continue with laughter “ its comfortable for your sister in law ask her she will tell you” than saw the expressions of Kiran  who was smiling and replied “ yes it is at least for me”, then everyone sat on the sofas, Kiran wore a hijab cap that’s why she loosed her scarf. She did strict hijab from all males except his brother, Ahmed; Shamir and his father’ Ashfaq. All the family members were talking sharing joy and happiness at morning.

                      

“Oh Aslam O Alikum, Ahmed!” Ahmed’s father phoned him.

“Walikum Aslam! What about you Abu how are you” Ahmed greeted and asked about his health

“Fine beta now tell me about you, Sadia and my naughty” he laughed “grandson Kabir”

Ahmed, with a great smile “Everyone is fine is fine Abu now tell me about Ammi, how is she what about her health, is her blood pressure balanced and what about her diabetes is it balanced?”

His father laughed “everything is fine in fact she is very fine!” his father calmed then asked about  us his son’s home town situation. He said everything is fine and blaa blaa bla.

His father with serious expression and in a way that parents are always right “that’s why I am against of your decision of migrating to America!”, Ahmed bow his head in the feeling of disobedience. Then his father advised in a begging way “today I still advise to come here where you born you can see the current situation of your nowadays home town where to live and settle is your dream to which you consider a country of free living birds” then in a sarcastic way he continued “and see today it is a country for a free living birds can be seen how much it gives freedom to its citizens” a salience was there then in between Ahmed and his father.

Ahmed as usual explained the same reasons why wanted to settle there with reasoned expressions just to earn more money and support his parents more generously and there is again a silence between father and son then conversation had ended with AllaHafiz.
Ahmed connect his phone with charger and went for changing clothes for office. He wore a light blue coloured shirt with shiny black pant and left the his apartment for office. He arrived at ------ company, greet his friends but some were very rude with him those who were Christians and Jews the reason was simple 9/11. After greeting he went on his desk and had a seat.

      

 

" hey Ahmed how are you bro?" John experienced and intelligent software engineer questioned with a great joy and happiness. But John was stupid even he didn't remember his grandfather's name, so occurred but he was one of those non Muslims who were still frank with Muslims even after September 11 attacks. While Ahmed and John were talking Abraham standing far behind John stared with strange eyes to Ahmed.

Ahmed who was talking to John, his good looking and jolly senior but a good friend saw while talking with him Abraham, staring him (Ahmed ) with strange and annoying eyes. Ahmed's laughing face turned into pleasing smile when he saw Abraham. When Abraham was coming near to him with   Horrible expressions and annoying or revenge taking eyes. Ahmed from inside   His blood became cold from the frightened of scolding which he thought but he get normal when Abraham ask John about his then Abraham put his hand on John's shoulder and they both start walking away from Ahmed's desk while talking "did you delete the p-tech?", abraham asked john. John stopped , surprised and asked "what P-tech bro?"
Abraham explained and informed "actually we sent your whole computer system to government agency which is near to our office", John experienced "oh! That's why I feel change in my PC". Abraham informed about P- Tech "yesterday they phoned to Cameron and informed him that they download a software P-Tech in your PC, then they explained him that they forgot to delete and ask him to delete it". John question when they both Abraham and he started walking " when did you send my PC over there?"
Abraham answered "8 of September"
"Okay", John replied with pleasure and went towards his room.

  Ahmed was sitting little far from John and Abraham who were talking about P- Tech and computer system they sent to government agent on 8 September. He was showing that he was busy in his work but actually he was listening their conversation. When John went in his cabin he decided to go in his cabin for giving him a file. "Today he has so many tasks, although he is so stupid and lazy, I will go in his cabin he definitely ask me to delete the software and he himself go for talking with other workers" he
explained said to himself and smiled then took his file.

Ahmed went in John's cabin. He showed him his file or task which he had completed john was also busy in his work.
John while working asked " ya Ahmed what happen?"
Ahmed was answering him but the phone rang "hey John please come in cabin cause I need your help" David requested who phoned John. John didn't  have a courage to say NO. He hurried "Ahmed I talk you later, I need to go in David's cabin", he was going to left his cabin for David's cabin and Ahmed too was leaving, feeling sad from inside but  spontaneously for John who was in hurry cellphone rang, Abraham messaged him " did you delete the P-Tech or not?" poor John got irritate Ahmed asked the reason, he requested with irritating manner "Ahmed delete the software named P-Tech from my PC otherwise Abraham will kill me today!".

 

 

Ahmed who was very hopeful turned into hopeless and again turned into hopeful when John asked him to delete the software from inside, in short sweets started to produce in his body instead of glucose. He got pleased so much that he forget to answer him of his request, John surprised and nervous
" can't you delete a software!" loudly, Ahmed who gone in another world after listening hope increasing request suddenly fall in the same world again when John loudly asked again and rapidly he said "yes yes of course why not" Ahmed thanked god that he didn't miss a chance on the other hand John get relax that his junior best friend say yes for deleting the software, ver calm-fully he walked out from the cabin after taking a deep breathe in cabin deep breathe with great relieve taken by Ahmed after taking a seat. He rapidly take out his USB from his pocket search where is the software in PC. P-Tech was in Local disk D, opened the software copied it in his USB and he was deleting the software but suddenly  Abraham opened the door and asked what is he doing here, Ahmed for a while  his heart beating  got speedy but he didn’t show that he is  speechless because Abraham can fired him and the other reason was Abraham’s occurred behavior with him today and third he was taking out information  but he replied  seriously “ John asked me to delete software from his PC that’s why.

Abraham rudely ordered to come out from John’s cabin. Ahmed did  what Abraham order him

         

 

Ahmed when saw Abraham in John’s cabin he was speechless because of copying software treasure and obscure in his USB but he gave a reply without highlighting his inner situation “John asked me to delete the software that’s why!”

Abraham with rude and revenge taking expressions ordered “come out of the cabin he have to do it himself he should not ask you to do it” ahmed left the cabin as Abraham said but he was very smart, he was pretty sure before the entrance of Abraham that Abraham can come in the cabin and made him speechless that’s why he rapidly copy the software in USB and put it in his pocket and came up to deleting the software and then Abraham about whom he was quite sure while Software was on the process of deleting and he left the cabin because of Abraham’s order.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ohhhwillow]

I think that before you embark on such big pieces, you should first brush up on your language. Perhaps start off with smaller writes and continue to do lot of reading until you are comfortable enough to write confidently. Perhaps even writing in your first language would do your creative pieces greater justice?

[Irenic]

What is wrong in my piece? Are there many grammatical mistakes? Is the content good or not?

[Coyote Poetry]

The story is very good. I will return and read later tonight when the house is quiet. The topic of the story is important and I like the way you are setting up the story. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent chapter.
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[Irenic]

ohhhhhhhhhhh you are so sweet thankyou :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Irenic]

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