guy meets 13 yr old girl he gets her hooked to meth at first without her knowldge then to snorting & shooting an the mix of first love an drugs she'll do anything & he wants her 2 or will make her.
PLEASE NO COMMENTS ON MY LACK OF PROPER GRAMMAR OR MIS SPELLINGS AS THIS IS ONLY AN ATTEMPT, I'M ACTUALLY THINKING ABOUT DISCARDING AN STARTING OVER BUT I'D GREATLY APPRICIATE ANY KIND OF COMMENTS ON WHAT YOU THINK GOOD OR BAD. wHAT YOU THINK FROM WHAT YOU SEE HERE I NEED TO WORK ON AN WHAT I GOT OR ANY ADVICE AS i HAVE NOT WROTE ANYTHING FULLY IN A VERY LONG TIME AN MISS IT SO BUT CAN ALWAYS USE THE COMMENTS AN HELP TO BETTER MY WRITING AN MAYBE FOR THE FIRST TIME IN YEARS I'LL GER FARTHER THEN A CHAPTER BEFORE i JUST CHUCK IT.
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And was there any inspiration from James Dean other than his quote?
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
no james dea didn't have anythin to do with anything I write. But is there something else you said o.. read moreno james dea didn't have anythin to do with anything I write. But is there something else you said or did you just start your sentence with and.
9 Years Ago
I started with "and" on purpose as you started with the James Dean quote. The "and" was a request f.. read moreI started with "and" on purpose as you started with the James Dean quote. The "and" was a request for more not the absence of more
you said "Live fast die young an leave a beautiful corpse", James Dean said "Live fast, die young an.. read moreyou said "Live fast die young an leave a beautiful corpse", James Dean said "Live fast, die young and leave a good looking corpse". Were you not aware of the origin of the quote?
9 Years Ago
I didn't even know it was one. To be honest its just rings true.
I posted review don't know that you got I like it is so true many young girls find themselves in bad situations sometimes not in their control some men prey on the innocent and young good work I am bad at t grammar so I wont judge you on that
I always loved to write but i haven't been able too get the block out of my head. With that being said please come an comment. I'll be doing everything from stories to articles, to writing prompts and.. more..