The Forgotten

 

On my knees

In this filthy muck of ground

I hear nothing

But in my mind your words still linger

Lets be friends

My wings have broken

Thus I’ve fallen

To this earth

Far from where I wish to be

My sockets cry mascara

All for what you’ve done to me

And all for what you will do for her

On my knees

In this filthy muck of ground

I hear nothing

But in my mind your words still linger

Lets be friends

I feel as if I’m truly nothing

Withering away

Empty

Dead

I’ve fallen down

Face in the dirt

Tears flee from my eyes

I look up to you, standing there above me

You say nothing

But in my mind your words still linger

Lets be friends

Lets be friends

Lets be friends

Reviews

[Rad!0Act!v3 T3ddyB3ar Z..]

This writing is so great, it speaks dread but the dread is true

[Jason]

Your words are so beautiful and pay such attention to detail as they tell a wonderful story. This is a truly beautiful work of art. I have enjoyed reading....

[Voice]

Great write!!! The dreaded words lets be friends many of us know them well. Just an absolutely wonderful piece!!!!

Voice

[lindsay]

well done. i can feel the emotion in the poem, which in my opinion, is always a good thing. =]

[Nathan Noble]

great emotions! awesome work.

[Tanya]

This is really sad. I get a feeling of what a lot of people have gone through.
You show true emotion is this poem.
Good Job.