People

There are people whose hearts have been shattered

Their souls have been battered

Being lost in the shadows

Not a sign of arrows

Just wanting to go home

But are left to roam

They start to go insane

And start cutting their veins

Their skin turns red

Not a tear they shed

They need to feel something

Their arms start gushing

All they wanted was a friend

But they were faced with a bitter end

Reviews

[toniwilliamsga]

can totaly feel the emotions and written very well.great job.

[Brittany W]

Great job, you showed the emotions very well in this poem and you did a nice job with keeping the rhyming and flow throughout your piece of work, nicely done.