Death

It's such a good way to go

Soon I will be a pile of bones

Bury me ten feet deep

Then maybe I could get some sleep

Shadows captured my heart

My soul, forever, in the dark

People, they don't care

They only come to stare

To watch me scream in pain

To watch me go insane

I really want to die

And never open my eyes

Reviews

[SilentVerses]

Beautifully harrowing , eerie in its short and powerful description of despair and defeat, insanity when it gets the best of us and surrounds us in a net we cannot escape until all we can see is the hatred we imposed on ourselves, so few words placed on the screen however so much said and portrayed in between the lines you have written, the ink flows fluidly crossing each other until there is no separating the fear from the desire and want and hurt. beautiful, I can relate and adore it.

[samurai212]

great work :)