Screams

The darkness is full of screams

Of people who lost their dreams

The shadows replace their souls

Their lives becoming dull

Their brains turn to mush

Their hearts being crushed

The voices they start to hear

Telling them that they are near

The clock is ticking down

Their screams become frowns

Soon it will all end

Then you'll lose a friend

Reviews

[sitting in the dark]

ur writing is awesome keep writing on girl :)

[SilentVerses]

The rhymes aren't forced, they flow nicely complimenting one another, another dark melancholy piece, full of emotion saddening and engulfing. You choose your words to mean something deep and sinister and yet portray them in a graceful and stunning way, love it.

[samurai212]

good job :D