Look...

I hide my tears.

I hide my scars.

Look at what you've done.

You pushed me away.

Outcast me from your life.

Look at what you've done.

I took this blade.

I took my life.

Look at what you've done.

Author's Note

though its simple, do you like? I think it could have been longer and I will try to make it so soon.

Reviews

[Brandon]

Very heartfelt. Nice Job.

[forfila]

I like it, its very dark though, I hope it is more metophor than reality.

Nice flow and rhym though,
good poem.

Love,
Me