Earth

Earth

A Poem by Inugal96

Heaven is cannibalistic;
it devours exclusively those that are akin to it.
Hell is a ghastly place
welcoming anyone in with it's
nondiscriminatory arms.
For this reason alone I have never been a religious person but
you seem to have been born from these 
warring domiciles,
like the babe of star-crossed lovers.
You were created from
heaven's impulse
and hell's luring temptation. 
--written by Sarah Cox at Arkansas Tech University

© 2016 Inugal96


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It’s just a tenant of human nature to be afraid of the Unknown to such a degree that we begin to grab at straws whereby we invent magic rituals meant to give us power over our greatest fear. “Necessity is the mother of invention.” Ritual’s have staying power because they must be done in exactly the same way each and every time, and then passed on to future generations of fearful minions who believe in their magic power.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Congrats on winning the "Poetry!" contest :) I loved this piece. It was beautifully executed, wonderful usage of personification, and it was short and sweet.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely written. I share the sentiment of being non religious, mostly from personal experiences. It's baffling to see people give their lives for beliefs that make no absolute sense.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Inugal96

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading :)
Beautifully picked words, creating great images. I like this piece a lot

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Inugal96

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
SonOfPlunder

10 Years Ago

You're welcome
It’s just a tenant of human nature to be afraid of the Unknown to such a degree that we begin to grab at straws whereby we invent magic rituals meant to give us power over our greatest fear. “Necessity is the mother of invention.” Ritual’s have staying power because they must be done in exactly the same way each and every time, and then passed on to future generations of fearful minions who believe in their magic power.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 26, 2014
Last Updated on February 17, 2016
Tags: Earth, Heaven, Hell, Religion