THE STAR WITH NO NAME

You were once the evening star
Whose name I didn't know
You caught my eyes from afar
Amused by your revealing glow

Since then I learned to love the night
As much as I long for the day
You were my most favorite sight
In the entire Milky Way

My heart rejoiced when darkness fall
For I shall see you soon again
If only I could, I would do all
To stop the day from comin'

Night after night I looked up the sky
To watch you glow and glow
Yet many years have passed by
Your name still I don't know

Then a friend came on to me
On a night that's so fine
She was also amused to see
My evening star, whom she called 'mine'.

Reviews

[sette]

i like how the poem is written so romantic and it is like seeing a star shining so bright that you can't help but wonder

[inuSarah]

Yes, Sette. The way you look at the person you love is way different from the others. They seem to be very special 😊

[AizenJ]

This is well written. I get what it means and I can relate to it. Well done! ^_^

[inuSarah]

Aww thank you, Aizen! Glad you can relate to it 😉