ABSENCE

I can give people space;
A space vast enough
That they could hardly notice
My existence.

I can give people time;
A time long enough
That they could no longer
Remember me anymore.

I can give people distance;
A distance far enough
That they could no longer see
Even the shadows of me.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

An interesting write. If you are willing to give up so much, maybe it is you that needs the space, time and distance. I like the way you approached this.

Chris

[inuSarah]

Thank you so much for your remarks, Chris! 😊

[MadisonJR]

I really like this. It is short and flows good and it has a strong message. Great work!

[inuSarah]

Thank you, Madison! I'm glad you like it. 😊