Shadows Dance

I am not beautiful.
nor am I sweet,
or amusing enough,
for you.

Shadows dance,
within you, and
the night calls me,
to solitude.

I wont die but,
I am dyng still,
every time mirth,
blooms in you.

I don't provoke,
this in you,
radiance is brighter,
anywhere but here.

If only you could,
see that somwhere,
here, yes here,
I am worthy.

But shadows dance,
within you, and
the night calls me instead,
to solitude.

Reviews

[Larissa G.]

It sounds gorgeous to me. Parts of it are images and ideas overused, but it appeals to me anyway. I like what you have. Maybe after a while you'll want to go back and touch it up, but I do think it's a good start. :)

[Pinky]

i like it... its really good! form is not every thing... i'm not really all that great at it either...idk...whelp that its i liked it and thats all that matters... ha!