Let It All Go

my emotions are too strong right now. might as well use it as an inspiration.

when you can't think of anything else

when your mind is full of nonsense

when the white looks black

when the cold feels hot

when you can't feel the pain

on that pin, you just stepped on

when you find yourself under the rain

on the middle of the summer season

things seemed to have  changed a lot

but here you are, still waiting on this same spot

watching people goes by

but no one ever stopped to say hi

sometimes you just want to move and leave

the times you've spent waiting, isn't it enough?

why is it too hard to laugh?

and too easy to be deceived?

why is my heart too kind to be mad?

why is my love too strong to destruct?

Author's Note

be my critic :)

Reviews

[Lavi]

"why is my heart too kind to be mad?
why is my love too strong to destruct?"
- I can relate to this line the strongest, glad to know I'm not the only one who has a heart with an attitude, haha ;)
Anyways, I love this poem, the conflict between seasons and events is really good and relatable. Nice work!