breath

I feel his breath brush against my bare skin. I feel him so close to me but I know he can never be mine...

I was laying in bed waiting for him to come home. It always happens like this. I wait for him to come home and he stays out late until the early morning. I shiver as I pull the blanket tighter around my small form. I hear the door open signaling he was home. "You're still awake?" His voice questioned as a slowly sat up. "Couldn't sleep." I replied to him. It was only half true. I could go to sleep I just didn't want to fall asleep without feeling his arms around me. I know I shouldn't be with him but I always feel safe around him for some odd reason. People say I shouldn't trust him. That he will only hurt me. But‚ can I be broken more than I already am? I love him even tho he might break my heart. I love him so much that it hurts when he's gone. Our relationship is complicated but I would trade the world just to spend forever in his arms. The reason why he is out so late is because he is trying to find a way to get out of an arranged marriage. Him and the girl he is engaged to don't want to be with each other. He loves me. She loves another. People often look at me with pity and disgust. My name is Brendon. I am a boy. I'm in love with Stephan. But does it make our love any less real? I finally fall asleep when I feel him wrap his arms around me and feel his breath brush against my bare skin. I feel warm...

Reviews

[Saddam]

Quite interest............ A very good write dear.

[child of God]

a very good writ I suggest more details and info on the charters

[FlatLineBeauty]

This was really good. What you have is love. Sometimes love hurts, but we always know who has our heart and in turn the hearts we hold. The arranged marriage is the agonizing part. Hopefully, things work out. xo Winter

[Rose Diamond]

Pretty good! The story itself is really good, but my only suggestion is to work on the word choices and to go into detail a bit more. But anyways, good job! :)

[A.T.]

very good! I liked it; it has a good start. Shows good emotion and the power of love. My only suggestions are to separate some of it into paragraphs and maybe expanding it so we get to know the characters better? And if you already planned on doing that: oops, my mistake xD