Lilies

 

 

The black sky wore

a garland of lilies.

That’s all I remember

of the day.

That’s all I want

to remember.

Reviews

[Kai Rollins]

Simplicity truly elicits truth. Fantastic

[Stefanie Holmes]

This is so simple and serene... loved it Devesh!

~Stefanie

[Devesh]

Thanks, Stefanie! :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Short and has a lot of meaning. There is so much in this to interpret and image with the diction you chose in your poem. From the title, word choice, and message---this is wonderful. :)

[Devesh]

Thank you! :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're welcome. :)

[s y e]

Short but makes an impact. lovely little short piece, here Devesh. Nicely stated.

[Devesh]

Thanks, Noodle! :)

[Shaquana Adams]

Short and impacting... my kind of poem. Thanks for sharing! ^-^
-QuanaWana

[Devesh]

Thank you! :)

[Ayushi]

Less words and perfect emotions :)

[Devesh]

Thank you :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You have managed to say so much with so few words Devesh.This is full of emotion and penned so well :)

[Devesh]

Thank you, Vidya! :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome Devesh :)

[Konigin]

Such emotion in so little words. Splendid job Devesh! ^,^

[Devesh]

Thank you, Chelsea! :)

[Konigin]

:) You are welcome!!

[Madalyn Beck]

Short and sweet. "That's all I want to remember." Isn't that often times how it goes? We only want to remember the good, no matter how powerful the bad and dark might be. Beautiful. (:

[Devesh]

Thanks a lot, Madalyn! :))

[Brook]

Short, and certainly sweet.
"That's all i want to remember." I love that line!
It's very truthful. Sometimes the only things we remember, are all we actually want to remember. Beautiful job, Devesh!

[Devesh]

Thank you, Brookly! :))