Never Alone

I sit beneath the clouds and look at the sky above, and below as the words start to flow like a game of habit where pearls of glass glint under the moon and not a moment to soon. I see a lamp ablaze in the distance. it tells me I'm not and I'll never be alone, as long as I sing the song of my soul. it's a dark night, but a star shines bright. I'll never be alone, I'll never be alone.

Reviews

[Konigin]

This stirred something deep inside me Devesh. Really powerful. The imagery again paints a sharp and detailed picture. I'm still envious of how easily you rhyme in your poetry. I loved this part:

"as long as I sing
the song of my soul.
it's a dark night,
but a star shines bright.
I'll never be alone,
I'll never be alone."

Great Job Friend! :D

[Devesh]

Thanks a lot, Chelsea! Your reviews mean a lot :))

[Konigin]

You are so welcome Devesh. Any time! :DD :)) ^,^

[Najam Us Saher]

Nature provides best company, one is never alone in presence of nature.
What a lovely poem I have found to read when I am sitting under the open sky and surrounded by sky and clouds. You made me feel your words.

[Stefanie Holmes]

We all are truly never alone/ Beautiful job with this piece Devesh!

~Stefanie

[Kai Rollins]

"I'll never be alone." This means something to me. I can't really say but I feel it. And I love that. Thank you (brilliant write)

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is so great Devesh .I believe that we are never truly alone.Loved this that I did :)

[Devesh]

Thank you :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Madalyn Beck]

A very uplifting write! It really is a great feeling to know that no matter what we are never really alone. I love this Devesh! Great work here! (:

[Devesh]

Thanks, Madalyn! :))

[Erik Daniel]

Wow Devesh. A beautiful uplifting poem. Well done sir!

[Devesh]

Thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

A great feeling indeed that we are never alone in our daily grins, struggles and even contemplation. A wonderful write...:)..............

[Devesh]

Thanks, Sami! :))

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)..................

[Brook]

I really like this. It's very beautiful, and i really love the flow of it. It's one of those poems that would be lovely being spoken aloud. Wonderful job, Devesh :)

[Devesh]

Thank you, Brookly! :))