Her

Her

A Poem by Devesh

I used to sit there,
beside the fireplace,
watch her dance around,
in her frock of pretty lace.
The warmth of her presence
was warmer than the fire,
being with her,
I just couldn't tire
of her lovely smile.
But now it's been a while,
It's been a while
since she sat in my lap,
like she used to,
back when she loved me.

© 2014 Devesh


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Beautiful. I love how you painted such a beautiful picture. I can envision the room with the fire going. Her dancing around - then suddenly disappearing, leaving you alone in the room with nothing but the fireplace to warm you. Stunning write, Devesh! Love this! xo (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devesh

10 Years Ago

I love reading your reviews! Thanks for stopping by, Madalyn :))



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Something a bit different from your pen Devesh...bittersweet memories always linger from past relationships that are no longer burning. Enjoyed. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Devesh

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading, Frieda :)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

My pleasure, nice to see you back at the cafe. :)
This is so very sad Devesh.People tend to outgrow each other sometimes .Who knows why ,different interests and lives change.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Devesh

10 Years Ago

Yes, it is. Thank you for reading, Vidya :)
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)

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Devesh
Devesh

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