The Sweet Sound of Dreaming

I feel this one needs a little bit more work to unify the entire thing together but I like it thus far.

Waiting for the sun to come into view

Down on love street where I met you

Under those peculiar harvest moons

They play those wicked jazz tunes

For all the passing fools in the rain

Walking down to catch the next train

Missing all that the world has to see

Like the beauty standing next to me

I'll take her some place far from here

Where there are no more fools to fear

 

There is no more beautiful thing

Than to hear the sound of spring

Only in dreams is this surpassed

As my thoughts slowly amassed

They crafted you into this song

One night you began to sing along

Now there's nothing else I dream of

You sparkled like the down of a dove

As you danced on a moonlit beach

Happily, out of every fool's reach

 

A wind sweeps through my mind

A symphony of a different kind

Reaches deep into my cerebellum

As a nearby bird begins to hum

A chorus of angels joins along

To bring to life a beautiful song

Sweet melodies, caress my ears

Raindrops begin to fall like tears

Under the gray sky's infinite tent

The stage set for a magical event

 

Tiny footprints in the passing sands

Walk together as we join our hands

The waves crash on the beach nearby

Gulls cry overhead, as they deftly fly

Critters squeak as they scamper 'round

Your sweet voice completes the sound

Of nature's most elegant work of art

On the vibrating strings of my heart

The final notes begin to softly play

The symphony, my dream, slips away

 

Reviews

[shinybluestars03]

Wow this is a awesome poem i loved every line,
very passionate, beautiful poem it leaves me speechless.
It has a lovely flow just makes me smile :D
Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece
and hope you keep on writing i'll be looking for it.

Best wishes