12/18/17

12/18/17

A Poem by Raven Lane

Sometimes I feel my heartbeat is like a small bird chirping in the distance. Admired by some but overlooked by many. 

© 2018 Raven Lane


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Get rid of the first "like", it is needlessly redundant. 'Sometimes I feel my heartbeat is like...' is much cleaner.

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Raven Lane
Raven Lane

Lilburn, GA



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My name is Raven Lane I am 20 years old. I enjoy writing with my free time. I am a very genuine and open person. I hope to share my work and get inspired by others. more..

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