Life

Written in the summer of 13'

In life, loneliness is a given 

Lies cover up truth

Beauty is hindered by society 

Happiness isn't guaranteed 

Fear lingers in the air which we breathe 

Heartbreak is inevitable 

Our questions remain unanswered 

Everything is temporary 

Comfort is out of reach

Pain is masked, and music is the only escape 

Religion confuses 

Material controls us

Education is misused 

Drugs are abused and people are used 

Ignorance becomes convenience 

And it's all just one vicious circle 

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

So very true. But, oh, what joy to carve out a space for yourself and that select few with whom we will share honor, loyalty, and faith. It will be a hard fought road to create, but it is possible, as I can joyfully attest of my own life. Life can shine, can go beyond the lonely tragedy always nipping at the edges of our reason.

[Harmony-Lee]

Wow! great piece, to to the point but true. It is how it is and will continue to be.
Shared on my fb page :-)

[Raven Lane]

thank you. I'm flattered :P

[Bhumika Devkota]

It has spoken the truth. Great work

[Raven Lane]

Thank you.

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I'd love to read what you wrote at a younger age, because I felt that still feel some things mentioned. It is the spoken truth great work:)

[Raven Lane]

This is actually one of my first piece of works from when I started writing. I always kept a journal but this was the period when writing became a bigger part of my life. I am actually going and posting things from my journal so you should go check the out!! and than you very very much :)

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I wish id kept all my many works in life but I didn't, I do have them inside that cant be shaken to see again. I will check them out thanks for sharing your heart and your welcome:)