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“There is only one way to happiness and that is to cease worrying about things which are beyond the power or our will.” ~ Epictetus

Surrender is not giving up

It’s the understanding

That some things are outside

One’s control 

Coming to terms with this

Will ease one’s mind

Understanding that one

Never steps in the same

River twice

Reviews

[Desert Knave]

Excellent thoughts ... reminds me of parts of the serenity prayer. ~Jim

[MCS]

Jim, thank you so much for your words and visit.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Epictetus taught that philosophy is a way of life. You have a way of construing his teachings into the here and now, with the caliber of poetry such as this. It astounds me the precision and clarity you bring into focus!

[MCS]

Kelly, thank you for your visit and kind words. There is a certain comfort one gets from ancient viewpoints; more so in turbulent times.

[Amy R]

VERY TRUE, this poem emphasizes the importance of recognizing and coming to terms with the inevitable changes and uncertainties of life.

Quite a straightforward write,.

The phrase "never steps in the same river twice" alludes to Heraclitus’ philosophy on change, adding depth to the poem.

Thanks for sharing... -Amy

[MCS]

Amy, thank you for your visit and sharing your thoughts. There is a certain comfort to ancient viewpoints. Cheers, Mary

[Dylan Macadham]

Reminds me of the Serenity Prayer often seen in people's homes,
Especially love your last 3 lines, they add a new dimension :)
PS: the review you sent me this morning was blank. Was 'Oops!' that bad?😅

[MCS]

Thank you. I reposted my comment.