Lucky Shot
A Poem by
MCS
“Animals are such agreeable friends—they ask no questions; they pass no criticisms.”
~ George Eliot
My essence seeks solace
In dappled sunlight
In soft snorts
Flowing mane
Graceful step
Loving soul
My friend sees me
As I see him
From the ashes
He and I ascended
Our spirits bonded
~ acrylic on canvas
© 2024 MCS
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Such wonderful imagery in this poem. The experience of bonding with the horses soul sent shivers up my spine. Thank you for sharing your writing.
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Lisa thank you for your visit and sharing your thoughts, its so appreciated. Time spent with horses.. read more Lisa thank you for your visit and sharing your thoughts, its so appreciated. Time spent with horses or dogs is never time wasted.
Who's to say what happens after the lights go out? Perhaps both animal and human consciousness persist in The Great Beyond.
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Who's to say what happens after the lights go out? Perhaps both animal and human consciousness persist in The Great Beyond.
1 Day Ago
John, thank you for dropping in and sharing. I like to think that anything is possible.
you've got that right. horses (as well as other animals) are magnificent creatures - loyal and emotionally intelligent. nicely said.
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you've got that right. horses (as well as other animals) are magnificent creatures - loyal and emotionally intelligent. nicely said.
1 Day Ago
Pete, my thoughts exactly. Thank you for reading and sharing.
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Added on December 28, 2024
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MCS Toronto, (GTA), Canada
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For me writing, painting and photography are the best ways to talk without ever being interrupted.
Poetry: the best words in the best order
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