Broken
A Poem by MCS
The dreams of the broken are mightier than the wishes of the dead.
~ Dodinsky
Devastated and
broken
the dreams have left
me
abandoned and lonesome
Bleak landscape
time passing quickly
a life of hardships
© 2020 MCS
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your words inspire me
merci mon ami, merci
Posted 4 Years Ago
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but around the next corner, the landscape may change drastically...
let's hope for this speaker there is fertile land awaiting.
j.
Posted 4 Years Ago
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If you are alive, something is there. Seek it.
Posted 4 Years Ago
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There is much depth in the brevity of your lines. The loneliness and the struggle really got through to this reader. Well done.
Chris
Posted 4 Years Ago
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Added on January 22, 2020
Last Updated on January 22, 2020
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MCSToronto, (GTA), Canada
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For me writing, painting and photography are the best ways to talk without ever being interrupted.
Poetry: the best words in the best order
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