Chill

Chill

A Poem by MCS
"

To appreciate the beauty of a snowflake it is necessary to stand out in the cold. ~ Aristotle

"



The fog of breath


Shivering as goosebumps form


Longing for spring


 

Landscape covered in white


Brilliant as diamonds


Perfect day to ...





 


© 2019 MCS


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I love how you left your closing line open for... whatever. This makes me miss home. Thank you, Mary!

Posted 5 Years Ago


A beautiful poem to match an exceptional photo. Bless you, for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


MCS

5 Years Ago

Thank you Dawn.
Your image is to die for. Your first line transported me into the scene where my warm breath was condensing in the atmosphere. You certainly gave me the chills with your lines and yes I saw the glint of diamonds in the sunlight. Lovely work. Brevity works well here.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago



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MCS
MCS

Toronto, (GTA), Canada



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For me writing, painting and photography are the best ways to talk without ever being interrupted. Poetry: the best words in the best order © 2024, M.C.S. - all rights reserved more..

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