Weathered

Weathered

A Poem by MCS
"

Still around the corner there may wait, a new road or a new secret gate. ~ J.R.R. Tolkien

"


Squeaking in response


to a gentle summer breeze


worn garden gate




© 2018 MCS


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This has a graceful gentle feel, similar to your perfectly selected artwork. It reminds me of the now-old saying about living like someone left the gate open *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


MCS

6 Years Ago

Thank you, for reading and sharing, it’s so appreciated :)
Thos weathered gate can tell us many things. Empty house, abandoned garden, survival through the elements of nature and much more. Powerful brevity here my friend.

Posted 6 Years Ago


MCS

6 Years Ago

delighted by your kind words, thank you
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

Absolutely delighted.
I can almost hear the sound of it creaking. There's certainly a melancholy feel there.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Yes, it has stories yet to tell. So many hands and hearts have touched it. Tolkien knew. Beautiful poem my friend. A multifaceted gem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


MCS

6 Years Ago

:) thanks, I agree Tolkien knew

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Added on August 12, 2018
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MCS
MCS

Toronto, (GTA), Canada



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