Lament

Tangled through me

chaos overwhelms the core

after a long sleepless night

 

As the world sleeps

here on this lake as the sun rises

a lonely soul seeks peace

~ Mississauga Lake, Kawartha Lakes  

Reviews

[Ty]

The words more vivid than the accompanying image.

[MCS]

Thank you your words are appreciated

[Karmee]

Very BEAUTIFUL write here,
very awesome

[MCS]

Thank you for those kind words

[Karmee]

no problem

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Breathtaking image and poem of searching & solitude so well- written. " A lonely soul seeks peace" - introspective, exquisite line. Wonderful!

[MCS]

:) thank you so much

[Carol Cashes]

"Tangled through me
chaos overwhelms the core"

Using "tangled" and "chaos" is genius - minimum words to describe a restless, questioning soul. I salute you, word-slayer!

[MCS]

CC, I thank you for reading and being so kind with your comment.

[keith]

parfois, c'est bon si la seule chose que vous avez faite aujourd'hui a été respirer.
il est toujours bon de réfléchir en prenant une pause très nécessaire

[MCS]

Je sais que vous comprenez.

[Damien Ridge]

That took me away to the lake, forgetting about the troubles of my dreams and the problems of today. Just seeking peace, just enjoying the serenity. Thank you for sharing, I enjoyed where it took me for such a small poem.

[MCS]

I'm delighted to hear that, thank you so much for those kind words.

[MCS]

Sometimes it’s okay if the only thing you did today was breathe.